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Practice: Paraphrase the given essay prompt 1. “Smoking is bad for our health.” - Smoking has harmful effect on our body. 2. “Some people think watching sports is a waste of leisure time.” - Some people say watching sproting events idle our spare time away. 3. “People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past.” - In the modern society, many people have shorter sleeping hours than before...

- requirement Tips on getting a high score in the IELTS Writing 1. Before you start writing, it is important to know the 7 types of essays to raise your task achievement score. Your score will increase if you: • Pay attention to ALL issues in the essay question • Write about the issues rather than the general topic • Answer the question with relevant main points • Plan your supporting points so ..

Q. Many people use the Internet as their main educational resource. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this practice? Brainstorming Intro Body1 장점 : 찾고 싶은 정보의 영상이나 사진을 얻어 이해하기 쉬움. 정보를 얻을 수 있는 방법 중에 가장 빠르고 쉽게 정보를 얻을 수 있음 (책은 한 권을 다 읽거나 시리즈를 다 읽어야 얻을 수 있는 정보 , 인터넷은 요약되어 있는 정보를 빠르게 얻을 수 있음) - 얻고싶은 정보의 키워드만 입력하면 키워드와 관련된 많은 양의 정보를 얻을 수 있음. Body2 단점 : 너무 방대한 양, 출처를 알 수 없는 정보들 - 정보의 참거짓을 따질 ..

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Tips Important Things: Date - This will determine what tense of the verb will be used in the answer F..

Answer : 286 words 교정 전 Answer : words 교정 후 Intro In some sense, it is true that if women and men have the same abilities, they can do the job identically regardless of gender. However, Although both genders are able and skillful in doing jobs in the same way, I believe that there are more favorable and essential jobs suitable for each gender. Body 1: Why men and women are capable of doing all j..

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